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Serum Part Four by ~bluelemer79:iconbluelemer79:



   When JJ awoke he looked around the room and immediately jumped to his feet. The room was small about the size of a jail cell. He walked to the door and tried the handle. Locked just like he expected. He studied the room. A bed and a chair were the only thing in the room. He walked around and found no weapons and no way out but the door. He walked over and hit the door and turned around to lean up against it. Only he didn’t stop at the door. With a cry of surprise he fell thru the door and into the hallway. He jumped up and found himself staring at the outside of the door. But the door was still closed and locked. He walked toward the door and walked right thru it. He thought for a second and realized that he had the ability to walk thru walls. His second gift just kicked in. Then he began to wonder if anymore abilities were going to emerge. He walked back to the door and peeked his head out and looked both ways and saw a guard he hadn’t noticed before walking away from his room. The guy turned around at the end of the hall and started back toward his room. JJ pulled his head back just enough to see out and when the guard passed he stepped all the way out and hit the guy in the back of the head hard enough to knock him out. He pulled the guys gun from its holster and put it in his own and picked up the guys legs and dragged him thru the door into the room and dropped him. He looked toward the door and realized he hadn’t even opened it. Apparently if someone was touching him he could take them thru walls as well. This would be useful if Jessica’s room was locked like his was. And without his walkie-talkie it would be impossible to get Kevin to help him. He left the room and started walking the way the guard had been coming from and peeked into each room as he passed. About three rooms down he found Jessica lying on a bed. He stepped all the way in and walked to her side. He dropped to a knee beside her bed and reached out to wake her. Jessica rolled over and threw a punch that nearly collided with JJ’s head as he jumped back instinctively. Jessica jumped up and saw it was him and said, “What happened, where are we. Wait a minute. How did you get in her?”
   JJ walked over to the door and said, “Check this out.” He walked out of the room thru the wall and came back in. “Got my second gift,” he said triumphantly, “and I can take whoever is touching me thru the walls too.”
   Jess walked over to him and said, “Then I say we blow this pop stand, find the doc, and get the hell out of here before they realize we’ve escaped. And we should find some weapons.” JJ grabbed her arm and walked thru the wall. He expected Jessica to come thru the wall as well and was surprised when he got yanked back. His arm was still thru the wall and he felt Jessica’s arm in his hand. He walked back thru the wall and saw Jessica rubbing her head, and when she saw him she asked, “What the hell did you do that for?”
   JJ thought for a moment and said, “Take my hand in yours and try walking thru the wall.” When Jessica took his hand she looked skeptical as she walked toward the wall. JJ joined her and they passed thru without further incident. JJ said, “Well, I guess we have to have skin contact for it to work properly.”
   Jessica said, “Sooner or later all guys say that,” and grinned at him. Then they headed for the room that they had first spoken to Dr. Craver in.
©2008 ~bluelemer79
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Well, now you see another gift. How many gifts do they get, you'll just have to keep reading to find out. And I have to keep writing to find out myself.

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*Sythrigirl:iconSythrigirl: Mar 10, 2008, 6:41:09 PM
yeah, i know how it feels to write on a whim...

awesome story so far- i can't wait to read more:D

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when will i get a life?
~bluelemer79:iconbluelemer79: Mar 10, 2008, 8:16:53 PM
thanx, maybe you can help me out, i know they are both gonna get three gifts, and one together. What do you think they should now get. You are my biggest fan, so, there ya go. give me a hand.

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I have lost my mind. Do you have it? Would you tell me if you did?
*Sythrigirl:iconSythrigirl: Mar 10, 2008, 8:40:01 PM
I think that they should share the ability to mentally communicate with one another.

I would have Jessica get the power to teleport over short distances.
I would have JJ get the power to turn himself, or other things invisible.

This would make Jessica stronger in a battle, having the ability to teleport behind a foe and stab him in the back would be awesome, and right now she seems kinda weak to me.
JJ is already pretty strong in the power department so being able to turn things invisible is a good equalizing power. This brings them more into balance and stuff.

Having the power to talk to each other silently is invaluable when running away from the bad guys or sneaking up behind them.

Yeah, this is what i'd do, so :shrug: your choice in the end, but i am more than happy to give you my thoughts on the idea. :D

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when will i get a life?
~bluelemer79:iconbluelemer79: Mar 10, 2008, 9:47:25 PM
yeah, i knew JJ was stronger than Jess and it was totally unintentionall. And those Ideas you gave me were perfect. I never thought of those three. Thanx, and who says fans have no input on their authors stories.

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I have lost my mind. Do you have it? Would you tell me if you did?
*Sythrigirl:iconSythrigirl: Mar 11, 2008, 6:35:32 PM
anyone who does is either insane or terminally retarded... :O

I am glad you like my ideas :D

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when will i get a life?
~bluelemer79:iconbluelemer79: Mar 12, 2008, 12:42:48 AM
hey, they work, you really need to read By The Light Of The Moon by Dean Koontz. It is about like my story, very big deviations with powers and administration. But good nonetheless, what I have read of it anyway.

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I have lost my mind. Do you have it? Would you tell me if you did?
*Sythrigirl:iconSythrigirl: Mar 12, 2008, 6:41:23 PM
cool

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when will i get a life?
~bluelemer79:iconbluelemer79: Mar 12, 2008, 10:21:28 PM
oh, and when you get to the end of your dark tower series, you will probably be as mad as I was, i love stephen king, but he made me angry with the end of that series.

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I have lost my mind. Do you have it? Would you tell me if you did?
*Sythrigirl:iconSythrigirl: Mar 13, 2008, 7:27:47 PM
don't tell me anything or i'll have to track you down and rip your head off O.o

I know, he makes me mad sometimes...

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when will i get a life?